"These are fantastic notes!  I totally agree I need to get into the final massacre scene earlier. I like your pitch for the ending, especially bringing/evoking her mother’s spirit.

Thank you so much!  These are incredibly helpful and detailed."


- Lane Zola Williamson

"Thank you so much for sending your detailed, on-point notes! 

These are all very helpful and I look forward to making my project stronger!"

-Atsuko Tsuji